From 9e0f029c0a259671c57db81a3b67133da87b6c78 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Elizabeth Alexander Hunt <me@liz.coffee>
Date: Mon, 6 Jul 2026 21:59:17 -0700
Subject: Minor grammar

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   <div class="authorblock">
     <div class="author"><span class="pronoun" data-she="Elizabeth" data-he="Alexander">Elizabeth</span> Hunt (<span class="pronoun" data-she="she/her" data-he="he/him">she/her</span>)</div>
-    <div class="affil">Department of Penguins</div>
+    <div class="affil">Penguin Department, Seattle</div>
     <div><a class="tt" href="mailto:me@liz.coffee">me@liz.coffee</a></div>
   </div>
   <div class="date" id="today">July 4, 2026</div>
@@ -170,8 +170,8 @@
 
   <div class="abstract">
     <div class="head">Abstract</div>
-    <p>We introduce the author and establish some of <span class="pronoun" data-she="her" data-he="his">her</span> fundamental properties. If it's a proof you're looking for, well, the sourdough did that.</p>
-    <div class="center"><img src="assets/bread.jpeg" width="400"><br><em>Fig. 1 - The bread, proven. Also, baked.</em></div>
+    <p>We introduce the author and establish some of <span class="pronoun" data-she="her" data-he="his">her</span> fundamental properties. We then leave the bread dough to proof itself.</p>
+    <div class="center"><img src="assets/bread.jpeg" width="400"><br><em>Fig. 1 - Proven bread.</em></div>
   </div>
 
   <h2>1. Introduction</h2>
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