From 17cea319566528f3b9b8bf6cb7dca4f295ac1724 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Elizabeth Hunt <me@liz.coffee>
Date: Thu, 1 Jan 2026 20:39:30 -0800
Subject: Some rewording

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 		<footer>Samwise Gamgee</footer>
 	</blockquote>
 
+	<h2>Welcome to Misty Mountains Therapy</h2>
+
 	<p>
-		Misty Mountains Therapy is a privately owned, high quality, specialty therapy clinic,
-		founded in January 2020 by Jefferson Hunt. We are dedicated to providing comprehensive
-		therapy evaluation and treatment services to children and adults for a wide variety of
-		disorders in the most efficient and effective manner possible in the Rexburg area. We
-		believe that therapy should be fun, engaging, and most importantly, useful to our clients.
+		Founded in 2020 by Jefferson Hunt, we are dedicated to providing high quality therapy services to children and adults throughout the Rexburg area. Our approach combines professional expertise and genuine care to help clients navigate life's challenges.
 	</p>
+
+	<h3>We're Here to Help</h3>
+	<p>
+		We are currently accepting new clients. Whether you're seeking support for yourself or a loved one, we offer personalized treatment tailored to your unique needs and goals.
+	</p>
+
 	<p>
-		<strong>We are currently accepting new clients and offer a variety of services to help you live the
-		life you desire</strong>.
-    </p>
-    <p>
-        To find the right fit for you, schedule a <a href={resolveRoute('/contact')}
-			>free 15-minute consultation</a
-		>.
+		<strong>Ready to take the first step?</strong> Schedule a <a href={resolveRoute('/contact')}>free 15-minute consultation</a> to see if we're the right fit for you.
 	</p>
 
 	<aside class="notice notice--warn" aria-label="Crisis information">
 		<p style="margin: 0">
-			We do not have a crisis line. If you or someone you know is in danger please call 911, visit your
-			nearest emergency room, call the National Suicide Prevention Lifeline for free crisis counseling at
-			<a href="tel:18002738255">(800)273-TALK</a> (8255), or text HELLO to 741-741.
+			<strong>Crisis Support:</strong> We do not have a crisis line. If you or someone you know is in danger, please call 911, visit your nearest emergency room, call the National Suicide Prevention Lifeline at <a href="tel:18002738255">(800) 273-TALK</a>, or text HELLO to 741-741.
 		</p>
 	</aside>
 </section>
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